写作任务

假如你是来自美国的Sue， 7月15日你从北京飞抵广州旅行。请根据下列提示信息，给自己在美国的好友Aaron写一张明信片，简单介绍一下你的旅行经历。

要求：

1. 所写内容必须包括上面提示的所有要点，可适当发挥；

2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚；

3. 词数90左右。

参考词汇：

长隆野生动物园 Chimelong Safari Park

广州塔 Canton Tower

三胞胎 triplets

写作思路与分析

当我们外出旅游时，我们会通过给朋友邮寄明信片的方式来和朋友分享自己的旅行经历。明信片分两栏写。右栏写收信人的姓名及地址，左栏写日期、称呼、正文、结束语和签名。

一、日期：写在正文的左上角，称呼的上方。

二、称呼：与信件的称呼相同，如：Dear Ann, Dear Mum, Dear Miss Smith等。

三、正文：主要告知对方自己的一些旅行经历等。具体到本次写作任务，我们根据命题所给出的提示信息，可以将正文分成三个部分来写：

1. 表明自己旅行的地点;

2. 介绍一天的游览行程;

3. 说一说自己的感受。

四、结束语。最常用的结束语为Best wishes, With love等。

五、签名：写信人的签名一般写在正文的左下方，结束语的下方。

注意：由于明信片的面积所限，正文部分要直奔主题，语言要简练。

词汇储备

交通方式

on foot

take a bus / car / train…

by air / plane / coach / underground…

你的感受

comfortable, beautiful, cheap, relaxing, fast, dangerous, interesting, expensive, tidy, slow

句型荟萃

交通工具

1. I flew direct to…from…

2. I took the plane / underground to go…

3. I went there by plane and the flight was fast.

4. Flying to…from…was fast.

5. We booked our air tickets and went there by plane / air.

6. It is easy for…to go…by underground.

主体部分：

1. As soon as we arrived in this city, we started our journey…

2. It is a zoo which is famous for the animals from all over the world.

3. There are all kinds of animals, including...

4. Without doubt, the main tourists’ attraction is…

5. Visitors are allowed to feed…and I tried it.

6. Feeding…was the most special experience I’ve

ever had.

7. It was my first time to have dinner in such a place which is high above the ground.

8. I tried the local snacks which were so fresh and delicious.

9. I enjoyed every moment while we were travelling there.

10. I had a great time / fun there.

11. How interesting / wonderful / excellent the day was!

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